Since my life hasn't been terribly exciting lately, I wanted to use this blog post to share some of my fiction writing with you guys! I'm only going to share the first page or so because some of it gets a little explicit, but also because I want to get you all as excited about this class as I am!
Enjoy, it's called "Search and Destroy."
November 28, 2014.
He
knows her from work. Chelsea. She has long brown hair that dips down
her back in a perfect U-shape when she wears it down, but she usually
has it up in a bun or a ponytail. Blue eyes slanted down slightly
with teeth that are just a little yellow and a little crowded. Her
forehead is peppered with a few pimples. Her hips hug her jeans. Her
breasts perk up in everything from t-shirts to blouses.
He
has known Chelsea for a couple of years now, joining her for the
occasional lunch date or catching up about classes – they both attend
Florida State University. She is bright with a little too much
cynicism. Not a bad girl, but not a great one either.
Chelsea
→
Are you going out later?
Probably.
What about you?←
→
I was hoping to.
Wanna meet up somewhere?
Sure. Frat house raging?←
→
You know it.
Cool, I'll be there around 11.←
He tucks the phone into his jeans and eyes his wrist –
10:17 p.m. The drunken screams of college kids tear through the
cracks in his bedroom window like the bitter cold in winter, ringing
in the back of his ears. The night has already begun for them. He
decides what he's wearing isn't suitable for a frat party, subbing
out dull black jeans and a blue t-shirt for a pair of beige khakis
and a crimson button-up.
He takes a few shots of vodka with his roommates. The
bitter taste wafts into his nostrils with a sharp sting, burning his
esophagus. He doesn't know what to do with his hands. He runs them
through his hair and rests them on his thighs, where they stay
planted like trees for uncomfortable periods of time. His face
struggles in gashes of red to break free from the unbearable
alcoholic heat.
Let me know if you have any suggestions or comments as well, I'd love to get feedback!
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